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How to Write Tiny Cliffhangers (and Keep Readers Hooked)

by Henneke | 54 enchanting opinions, add yours? :)

How to Hook Your Readers with One-Sentence CliffhangersThe idea of cliffhangers in business content always seemed weird to me.

Isn’t business writing too serious for that?

Business content aims to educate, market, and sell. We’re not writing a Netflix blockbuster.

But I have to admit I was wrong.

A cliffhanger adds a touch of drama, and that tiny bit of drama makes even serious business content more engaging. This works for blog posts, and even for sales pages.

Wanna keep busy readers hooked to your words?

Drama is about tension and a curiosity to learn more

Drama keeps readers spellbound because they want to know what’s happening next. Will the detective find the murderer? Will the shy youngster find love? Who will win this fight?

In fiction, drama can get quite complicated. You need characters that readers can empathize with and root for. You need a plot with twists and turns, so readers stay eager to learn more.

In business writing, we don’t need too many complications. We only need one-sentence cliffhangers to keep readers captivated for a few more paragraphs.

Let’s see how …

Michael Connelly is a bestselling crime writer, known for his series about detective Harry Bosch. He’s also written court room dramas about Mickey Haller, Harry’s half-brother and a defense attorney.

Court room dramas can be tricky. As a reader, you may sometimes think: I know what this witness is going to say, this is getting boring. The tiny cliffhanger pokes readers and keeps them engaged. For instance:

Little did I know how important this witness’s testimony would become.

This sentence immediately makes the reader curious: Why is this testimony important? What will it reveal?

Here’s another example, more subtle:

Sometimes the wheels of justice roll smoothly. The second day of trial started exactly as scheduled.

This sentence makes readers curious as they suspect the second day of trial may not end smoothly. What will happen?

One more example from Connelly:

It was this stack of correspondence that I was most interested in, and it was here that I found the document that would change the course of the case.

Readers want to find out what this document is, and how it changes the course of the case. This curiosity keeps them reading for a few more pages.

We can use the same principle to arouse curiosity in business content and keep our readers captivated for a few more paragraphs—no matter whether we’re writing business stories, blog posts, or sales copy.

Cliffhangers in business storytelling

Mike Sager is an award-winning journalist, who wants to empower creatives to pursue and profit from their work.

His blog posts on 99U.com are a mix of education, inspiration, and a large dose of personal storytelling.

His blog post Knocking Down your Creative Blocks, for instance, starts with this sentence:

This is a story about the day I quit writing.

On its own, this sentence might not make us curious, but we know this post is about writer’s block, and this context makes this sentence fascinating. Why did he quit writing? And how did he get started again? Can I learn something from what the author went through?

Another blog post by Sager—about being an artist in fractious times—starts with the sentence:

I became an artist at the age of 13, when a tear gas canister careened off the cracked asphalt of Reade Street in downtown Baltimore and skidded toward my feet, billowing gray smoke.

I don’t recommend writing a long opening sentence because they’re hard to pull off and keep readers engaged, but Sager immediately got me: How did he became an artist at the age of only 13? And why was he in this dangerous situation? And what has the tear gas to do with being an artist? These questions keep me reading on.

The following example from Sager is not the first but the third sentence. In the first two sentences of a blog post titled Creative Careers Demand Reinvention, Sager explains he’s talking to a former student, then he hits us with this:

“I got shit-canned,” he said, his voice like a thousand-yard stare.

In the context of reinvention, this sentence raises questions: Why did his student get fired? What did Sager tell him to do? And how did that help him reinvent his creative career?

One-sentence cliffhangers raise questions. These questions make readers curious, and that’s how you can keep them hanging on to your words. This also works in educational material.

Cliffhangers in “how-to” blog posts

In educational material, the reader is the hero, and the writer is his guide.

The reader is struggling with a problem or dreaming of a better life, and the writer tells him how to get there, how to defeat his demons, and how to achieve his goals.

The drama in educational material is about this tension between what is and what could be. The one-sentence cliffhanger is like a promise of what could be.

For instance, in a blog post about distracted readers and visual thinking, I promise:

But engaging your readers becomes a lot easier when you apply visual thinking tools to your writing.

The idea that visual thinking could solve the problem of distraction is intriguing. What are these visual tools? And how do they help? When these questions resonate with readers, they’ll keep reading on because they want to know the answers.

Here’s another example from a post about writing faster:

In the past years, I’ve read many books about productivity and writing, and I’ve learned a few crazy and counter-intuitive tricks to massively shorten the time it takes me to write good content.

Again, for the right readers, this is intriguing: How did I shorten my writing time? Why are these tricks crazy and counter-intuitive?

To keep business readers captivated, create a sense of mystery or promise them a solution to their problems.

Cliffhangers in sales copy

In sales copy, you’ll find one-sentence cliffhangers in testimonials or case studies. For instance:

I signed up for the Enchanting Copywriting Course wishing to renew our hopelessly outdated website text. For someone who’s by no stretch of the imagination a copywriter, this was a daunting task.

For readers considering joining this course, this sentence is intriguing. Did the course help make the daunting task doable? Did this participant get rid of her hopelessly outdated website? Was she able to learn how to write copy?

Here’s another example of a one-sentence cliffhanger:

And frankly, I wasn’t sure I could afford it.

This sentence refers to a common hesitation about joining courses because spending money is a risk: Is it worth my investment? Will I really learn something valuable? Will I have the time to commit to this course?

Your best sales people are the people who have hired you and enjoyed your service. They can tell the best stories. They can write the best sales copy for you. Their one-sentence cliffhangers hook potential customers as they become eager to learn more.

These one-sentence cliffhangers in the testimonials work best when they tap into a wish, fear, frustration, or doubt other potential customers recognize.

The web is full of fluffy content boring readers to tears

Let’s not add more fluff to this giant echo chamber.

Instead, think about your favorite reader …

How could you keep her captivated? What would make her curious to learn more?

When you keep readers spellbound for a blog post, they get addicted to your writing, and they’re bound to come back for more.

And when you hook them with your sales copy, too, making money becomes a whole lot easier. No pushiness required.

3 ways to hook readers with one-sentence cliffhangers

Recommended reading on captivating readers:

How to captivate readers with a few opening lines
How to inspire with your business story
Can you open the curiosity gap to entice more people to click and read?

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  1. Judith Gail Norris says

    January 21, 2023 at 6:02 pm

    Henneke,

    Thank you for brilliant and insightful thoughts and really cute drawings. I’m drafting a book about the Seven Secret Steps I used to live sixty-five successful years with Multiple Sclerosis and realize it’s too serious. It needs cliff hangers, curiosity, drama, fascinating question, and a promise that your article provided.

    Cheers,

    JK Norris

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      January 22, 2023 at 1:26 pm

      It sounds like you’re working on an important book. And I am glad you found this useful. Thank you for stopping by, Judith.

      Reply
  2. Izzath says

    May 4, 2021 at 6:40 pm

    The tips are very useful and interesting, Henneke. I feel I have improved my writing style after reading your posts. Thank you for the genuine advice.
    Meantime, can you please suggest some enchanting ways to write a travel blog post or article?

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      May 4, 2021 at 8:38 pm

      In the same way as you’d write a post about another topic. You always start with your ideal reader and what they’re looking for. What do they want to achieve with their travels? And how can you help them achieve that?

      Reply
  3. Magda says

    April 30, 2021 at 8:02 am

    From now on I will look for cliffhangers while reading 🙂

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      April 30, 2021 at 8:59 am

      Great! I love it when I learn a new writing technique and then see it everywhere. Thank you for stopping by, Magda. 🙂

      Reply
  4. Emily says

    April 28, 2021 at 2:58 am

    Wow Henneke, l know it will take me a while to apply even a quarter of the wisdom you freely pour into us.

    I am very sure,
    l will be taking your writing course soon. Thank you so much

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      April 28, 2021 at 3:14 pm

      I’m glad you’re enjoying my blog, Emily. Happy writing!

      Reply
  5. Festus Wambua says

    May 28, 2020 at 4:22 pm

    What an inspiration, I am expanding my knowledge every time I read from your posts, God bless you Henneke.
    Festus Wambua

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      May 28, 2020 at 4:24 pm

      Thank you, Festus. Happy writing!

      Reply
  6. Carl Tee says

    September 26, 2019 at 12:58 pm

    Hi Henneke,
    As always, you inspire and enlighten readers with your words.

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      September 26, 2019 at 2:28 pm

      Thank you, Carl. Happy writing!

      Reply
  7. Lubosi Jr Maboshe says

    August 9, 2019 at 6:26 pm

    Hello Henneke,

    Your writing and skill to recognize cliff hangers is amazing.How do you do it?

    Thanks.

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 9, 2019 at 6:55 pm

      Understanding the principle and then paying attention. Some authors use cliffhangers a lot more than others.

      Reply
  8. Kim Willis says

    June 30, 2019 at 2:05 pm

    Brilliant post. Thanks for stretching and challenging mere mortals like me

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      June 30, 2019 at 7:43 pm

      I’m glad you liked it, Kim. Happy writing!

      Reply
  9. Nick says

    September 29, 2017 at 4:39 pm

    Loved. Absolutely loved this post! Thank you.

    You actually gave me an idea to improve the copy on my writer’s website. One of my clients gave me a testimonial that’s the perfect cliffhanger.

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      September 30, 2017 at 6:14 pm

      That makes me happy, Nick. There’s no bigger compliment than using my tips 🙂 Happy writing!

      Reply
  10. mayxonghoi says

    September 28, 2017 at 5:57 am

    Henneke–Great explanation of cliffhangers, I kept visualizing my favourite authors and how they keep me hooked in their stories and I realise that I need to do more with incorporating this technique in my writing. Thanks Henneke.
    Always a pleasure reading your posts.

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      September 28, 2017 at 10:03 pm

      Thank you so much, May Xonghoi. That’s exactly how I improve my writing, too … analyze how others write, especially my favorite authors.

      Happy writing!

      Reply
  11. Katharine says

    August 16, 2017 at 2:03 pm

    Only three things to remember; I might be able to tackle this list. I hope it! 🙂
    I clicked on the link to your post about writing faster, thinking I remembered it from long, long ago, only to realize it was only a couple of months ago that I’d commented on it. Is it possible to be too busy to write, too busy to take the necessary steps, too busy to devote oneself to best practices? If so, that is just too busy. Yet, I can remember writing until 2am daily to produce some of the best work in my past.
    So now, I find all writing impossible. No matter when, no matter the circumstances, even, I’m not capturing my thoughts and not writing anything that could even be call editable.
    But I will. Somehow. I hope.

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 16, 2017 at 7:51 pm

      Yes, I definitely think it’s possible to be too busy to write. I find one of the challenges with writing is that it’s not just about the time we sit at our desk trying to write. We also need time to think and let ideas percolate. When life is too busy, then often this percolation time suffers. We don’t have enough time to let our mind wander and daydream, and then our writing suffers.

      I’ve also found, when I force myself to write when am actually too tired, then I produce crappy content and it takes a huge amount of time to revise it. When I write when I’m reasonably alert, then I can produce a decent first draft.

      I also think you probably know more than enough about best practices already, so don’t worry too much about it!

      I hope you get your mojo back soon, Katharine. I appreciate your making time to stop by and leave a comment.

      Reply
      • Katharine says

        August 17, 2017 at 6:17 am

        Henneke, I hope I will always find, steal, or make time to visit here.

        Reply
        • Henneke says

          August 17, 2017 at 8:44 pm

          I appreciate your support, Katharine.

          Reply
  12. Helen Partovi says

    August 16, 2017 at 1:13 am

    It’s wonderful to be at the receiving end of enchanting marketing emails again. Have just finished book revision after six months, and your content is as inspiring as ever!

    Many thanks.

    Helen

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 16, 2017 at 7:46 pm

      Congratulations for finishing you book revision, Helen!

      Glad you have time to read again 🙂

      Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate it.

      Reply
  13. Bernice says

    August 15, 2017 at 9:45 pm

    Hey, H.

    You have done it again. One of the most powerful things I have read to day.

    I hope someone or something does the same for you.

    I know it sounds cliche but you are a blessing may your well of knowledge, wisdom, and understanding never run dry.

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 16, 2017 at 7:45 pm

      Hey, Bernice,

      Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I get inspired by a lot of different people (and books!).

      Happy writing!

      Reply
  14. Marcella Friel says

    August 15, 2017 at 9:22 pm

    Thanks, Henneke~

    I think I just did this thing the other day….

    In my most recent newsletter, I told the story of how my coaching partner and I started working together.

    I likened it to proposing marriage….

    M.

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 16, 2017 at 7:44 pm

      And the tension of whether someone would say yes or no?

      Reply
      • Marcella says

        August 16, 2017 at 9:06 pm

        Egg-zackly.

        Reply
        • Henneke says

          August 17, 2017 at 8:44 pm

          Sounds good!

          Reply
  15. Sue-Ann Bubacz says

    August 15, 2017 at 3:25 pm

    Henneke:

    I just started an article about “hooking” in my writing work and I think this cliffhangers post is really precisely what I’m talking about. Just exactly how you pull people along by creating each word, sentence, and thought to draw them to read on to the next, hinges on the hooks, or cliffhangers, you present throughout a post. Hmmm. Looks like great minds meet once again! Haha

    I love your work, Henneke, and only hope to continue to improve to the point where, like you, I can make readers WANT to read my work—top to bottom:)

    Have a super fab and fun week and thanks for another great post to learn more about the writing craft. Thanks, Sue-Ann

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 15, 2017 at 8:59 pm

      Yes, great minds meet once again! I’m looking forward to your post about “hooking readers,” Sue-Ann 🙂

      Thank you so much for stopping by. I hope you’re week is going well, too.

      Reply
  16. Heidi Cohen says

    August 15, 2017 at 3:07 pm

    Henneke–Great explanation of cliffhangers. Every creative should be stealing like an artist from other formats. You need to use every tool at your disposal to get your content to attract and keep visitor attention. Happy marketing, Heidi Cohen-Actionable Marketing Guide

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 15, 2017 at 3:25 pm

      I agree with you, Heidi. The magic in creativity often happens when we steal from different formats. Happy writing!

      Reply
  17. Alison Beere says

    August 15, 2017 at 3:03 pm

    Thanks as always for the inspiration from fiction, I’m going to hunt down Michael Connelly now and read his novels!

    Your detailed examples mean that you always “show instead of just telling”, and it makes all the difference. It’s a big reason for me diligently reading your blog posts from beginning to end 😀

    I hope you are having a lovely summer.

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 15, 2017 at 3:24 pm

      It has taken me quite a while to see how I can implement fiction writing tools in business writing. But I’m finding it fun to look for similarities and trying out techniques.

      By the way, I prefer the Connelly’s Harry Bosch (named after the Dutch painter Hieronymus Bosch!) rather than the Mickey Haller series.

      Happy reading and writing!

      Reply
      • Alison Beere says

        August 16, 2017 at 7:56 am

        It seems so obvious when you point it out (using fiction techniques in business writing) but of course it’s not obvious, or we’d all be doing it anyway!

        I’ll definitely try out the Harry Bosch series first :).

        Reply
        • Henneke says

          August 16, 2017 at 7:47 pm

          I don’t think it’s that obvious. It took me ages to figure it out 🙂

          Let me know how you get on with Harry?

          Reply
  18. June Sayali says

    August 15, 2017 at 3:01 pm

    Two years after taking your copywriting course, I am still getting full support from your teachings day after day. Your recommendations are always in my mind whenever I start to write on anything from social media to my website and even to personal notes. I like the “purity” of your writing style which is so hard to find. Thanks for being such an extraordinary instructor, Henneke.

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 15, 2017 at 3:19 pm

      What a lovely comment! I’m glad my recommendations are still keeping you company.

      You put a spring in my step today, June. 🙂

      Reply
  19. Cathy Miller says

    August 15, 2017 at 2:27 pm

    Henneke, your posts are the cliffhangers to great reading. I so love how you make business communication more fun. This is a great idea, which I will steal…er…put to good use. 😉 Thanks!

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 15, 2017 at 3:16 pm

      Go ahead … happy stealing! 😉

      Thank you reading, sharing, and for stopping by again. I appreciate it, Cathy.

      Reply
  20. Yvette says

    August 15, 2017 at 2:19 pm

    As I read this, I kept visualizing my favourite authors and how they keep me hooked in their stories and I realise that I need to do more with incorporating this technique in my writing. Thanks for the reminder Henneke. Always a pleasure reading your posts.

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 15, 2017 at 3:16 pm

      That’s exactly what I do to improve my writing, too—try to understand why I like stories and how others tell them.

      Happy writing, Yvette, and thank you for stopping by!

      Reply
  21. Kathy Keats says

    August 15, 2017 at 2:16 pm

    Great article, Henneke, and the drawing was spot on! Loved it. I am skimming more and more articles these days because they aren’t engaging, so your advice on how to keep your reader’s curiosity aroused to read the next sentence or paragraph is even more important than ever!

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 15, 2017 at 3:14 pm

      I’m the same. I skim a lot of content and quite often can’t be tempted to start reading. I guess sometimes it’s because I’m not the target audience, but quite often content feels too fluffy or too superficial. I’m too impatient!

      Reply
  22. Swadhin Agrawal says

    August 15, 2017 at 12:51 pm

    HI Henneke,
    Thanks for writing on this. Getting readers’ attention and boosting engagement is as difficult as customer retention in the product industry.

    Being a blogger I know that I lose my readers when I write in-depth content but I think with your trick, with cliffhangers (I am surprised that we can use them in how-to style posts which is so great!), and questions.

    Thanks for giving us a great tip every week. I am lucky to have discovered your blog and being a reader of it.

    Thank you,
    -Swadhin

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 15, 2017 at 3:12 pm

      Yes, and getting attention is one thing, keeping it a whole different matter. And this can be especially difficult if you write long, in-depth content—in such a case, it’s useful to keep reminding readers why they’re reading this specific piece of content (how will they benefit), and include cliffhangers a few times.

      Happy writing, Swadhin, and thank you for stopping by again.

      Reply
  23. C A Hall says

    August 15, 2017 at 12:23 pm

    and then…the Tiger ate the copywriter and then…
    thanks as always Henneke

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 15, 2017 at 3:08 pm

      Oh my. I’m glad I wasn’t that copywriter. I’m still alive! 😉

      Reply
  24. Virginia says

    August 15, 2017 at 11:30 am

    Thanks for bringing this topic up! While I was reading your words, I realized how blurry it is sometimes the line between personal and business writing. I always thought the same with social media, because people want to see the real you, including the jokes as much as the success stories. I guess is the same with business writing, we are all curious about the real story and a little bit of drama.

    Is there any brand you consider successful in this skill?

    Reply
    • Henneke says

      August 15, 2017 at 3:08 pm

      I’m not sure I have an answer to that.

      I see brands as entities; at best they derive their personality from individuals working for a company (but quite often a brand personality is artificially constructed by marketers).

      I like, for instance, how Ann Handley, as Chief Content Officer, gives the brand MarketingProfs personality. But writing this seems odd – she has a personality, not the brand, but her personality reflects positively on the brand she works for.

      Reply

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